Some people prefer famous brands of clothing, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
When facing a variety of products, well-known brands become some people’s first option since brands usually stands for its quality and advancement, having longer years of accumulations and researches.
When consumers are facing a variety of products, well-known brands are some’s first choice, as they, with years of production experience, are sold on better practicality and durability.
▲ 原文两处分词短语结构，分别充当时间状语（facing a variety of products）和原因状语（having longer years of accumulations and researches），但facing句的逻辑主语“people”和主句主语“brands”未保持一致，having句原因状语成分置于句末（位于句首更符合用语习惯）。
▲ advancement 提升/晋升，用词不准，修改为practicality and durability实用性和耐用性
▲ be sold on 以…为卖点