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托福写作分类模板整合:对比类

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  北京新航道为您广大托友们提供的托福考试资讯和托福培训相关信息资料。托福写作是中国考生的弱项,那么怎么样才能写作能力呢。一般来说,在写作中,语法、用词以及逻辑思维是写作常见的问题,考生要想解决这些问题,平时就要多看一些范文,多做一些对比和积累,掌握写作的逻辑,才能写出好的文章。下面,我们就给大家提供一些不同类型的写作模板,帮助考生从中发现问题,同时找到并创造出适合自己的模板,写作水平。

 

  Question:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

 

  Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

 

  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

  Score 5 Essay

 

  Dishonesty kills reliability

 

  There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship.

 

  People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative.

 

  When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most important thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were.

 

  After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.

 

  In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person doesn’t think I can handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship.

 

  Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration in a relationship.

 

  Rater’s Comments

 

  In this response the writer first approaches the topic by underscoring that a number of character traits are important to a relationship. The writer then effectively develops an argument that unlike other negative behaviors, dishonesty or unwillingness to fully disclose some bad action cannot be forgiven and can be the most important factor in destroying a relationship. The writer’s language is fluent, accurate, and varied enough to effectively support the progression and connection of ideas. There is a variety of sentence structures, including rhetorical questions. The essay is not mechanically perfect, but as long as such errors are occasional, minor, and do not interfere with the reader’s understanding, an essay like this one can still earn a top score.

 

  以上就是为大家整理的写作模板,希望帮助广大考生们要认真的研读总结。另外在这提醒大家,每个人都有适合自己的模板,不要拘泥于一种,要从中总结出适合自己的东西,只有这样才能活学活用,才能写出好的文章来。预祝各位考生考出自己的理想成绩。

 

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