北京新航道托福频道小编通过实例的托福写作文章，为大家点评解析，希望帮助考生的了解写作的评分标准以及该如何去做。下面请看今天的例文解析：food easier to prepare：
题目
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
写作
Nowadays the food we eat is prepared fast and it really had an influence in our life. With all the aspects concerned, the change is considered to be negative.
As the time of the preparation is shortened, the nutrition in the food is reduced as well. Food producers do not focus on how much the protein and the vitamins should be contain, instead they just want to make the preparation shorter and shorter, which will be more efficient to satisfy the customers’ need, and this will help them to earn more money. Because of this reason, we can not obtain much nutrition from the food but only calories, and they do nothing to health.
Another aspect must not be ignored is that food plays an important role in our daily life. Sometimes we use food of various styles, tastes and colors to express our feelings just like musicians use tunes to express their passions. Fast preparation makes it impossible to show its advantage in art. All the food are the same taste, same style, and it makes the meal boring. Some people may even lose their appetite for meals as they are offered such a dull supper.
As you can see, the fast food preparations have many disadvantages although we could not neglect that it supply enough time to those businessmen and businesswomen who are working hard everyday always have no time for meals. But to make a thoroughly thinking, fast food make people fail to take into account that food is also vital in our life and is certainly an art, it still has more negative impacts in our life.来源：北京新航道托福培训
点评1：
instead they just want to make the preparation shorter and shorter, which will be more efficient to satisfy the customers’ need;这一句和主旨有抵触;可以去掉这句，只是说为了赚钱;
All the food are the same taste, same style;--这个太片面了，感觉不太让人相信，你可以重点举一两个例子说明味道不好，或者让人没有胃口;
Some people may even lose their appetite for meals as they are offered such a dull supper. --这里的supper不能代替food;
总体上来说还是不错的，句型简洁，通俗易懂，如果再论证方面多加润色的话，效果会一些，加油!
点评2：
不知道你自己改了没有,句话就有时态的错误...判分一下就很不利 。
观点基本清楚,有论据,说服力苍白 。
楼主用的句式对于托福作文来说有25分把,但是句子内容累赘。
我06年考的托福,我觉得你的水平在21-23分。
上面就是今天的托福写作例文解析的内容，讲的是有关食物Prepare的问题，希望大家通过的点评能够有所收获，写出的文章来，加油!
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