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12月21日托福独立写作真题范文 | 要繁华,不要拥堵!

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     独立写作题目

  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  The government should require drivers to pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic.”

12月21日托福独立写作真题范文 | 要繁华,不要拥堵!

  写作范文

  Introduction

  blah blah blah 略

  Body

  驳斥反方也是为自己的立场加码的论证内容和方式(尤其适用于自己的立场的理由不够多的情况)→ Since the fee is not yet charged, which is the commonplace in many cities, car owners, without any hesitation, opt to use their vehicles, and, as a result, there are congested roads. In addition to the congestion, on those roads, emissions from cars accumulate and pollute the city, and meanwhile,car collisions are highly likely, rendering the roads unsafe. Since all of these consequences may be attributed to the free access, the fee is necessary. ← 先说反面的情况,然后一句话“扭转”过来,就完成了论证 → If the use of the city streets incurs a fee, none of congestions, pollution and accidents will be as likely to happen as they are now. For example, the City of Shanghai changes such a fee, the current irritating and hazardous traffic conditions would not deteriorate but improve.

  The fee may dissuade potential car owners from buying motor vehicles. Considering the fee, which may be a considerable amount of money and may even increase to a greater amount, many people are likely toabandon the car purchasing plan, since they may find drivinguneconomical. Therefore, the fee may be used, by the municipal government, to put a cap on the surging car ownership.

  In addition, since the fee would apply during the rush hours of a day, it helps to enhance a city’s efficiency of transportation and to optimize the use of city streets. 接下来就是经典的论证展开过程 →

  (从fee推导到enhance a city’s efficiency of transportation)blah blah blah 略。

  (从fee推导到optimize the use of city streets)blah blah blah 略。

  Conclusion

  blah blah blah 略

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