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基于新航道托福《法宝教程》Page 88/90的综合写作材料的综合写作技法讲解

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开头段落:

The reading argues that Americans need to switch from their private automobiles to public transportation. Rebutting the reading, ←动词分词引导的(原因、条件、方式)前置的状语,陈述听力材料和阅读材料之间的关系: the lecturer contends that changing the long-formed habit would be impractical and ineffective.

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According the reading, in some cities around the globe, public transportation is so developed that a traveler can reach any part of a city without driving. This situation is, according to the lecture, however only possible in a city, where all destinations are within short distances, and impossible in the US, which has a vast land 【接下来的转述是重要难点:】that cannot be fully covered by any public transportation.←措辞关键:this situation为主语,后面两个表语并列,精简了句子,以及后面的两次定语从句。

突二:

Second, the reading is concerned about automobile transportation’s carbon emissions and the consequent global warming effect, and shows favor to public transportation for its less carbon emissions per passenger. In response, ←陈述听力材料和阅读材料之间的关系: the lecture states that car manufacturers are making electric cars, which have no environmental hazard / are friendly to the environment, as the replacement of the fossil-fuel-driven cars. 

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基于新航道托福《法宝教程》Page 112/114的综合写作材料的综合写作技法讲解

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开头段落:

Reading的开头段落中的信息重点很不明显,需要依靠全文和听力材料判断:The reading and lecture argue over whether Empress Cixi has been fairly judged, and the lecture refutes the multiple points of criticism in the reading.

突一:

According to the reading passage, Cixi was upset by Emperor Guangxu’s dismissal of many Chinese administrators during his reforms, and put Guangxu under house arrest, and was the most probable suspect of Guangxu’s death. This opinion is opposed by the lecturer. The lecture indicates that Cixi protected China from foreign rule, 通过状语从句形式把听力原文中并列的信息整合组织到一个句子里:as she intervened, using troops, with Guangxu’s handing over Chinese sovereignty to the Japanese.

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The reading also points out that Cixi’s aggressive act, permitting the Boxers to attach European diplomats and missionaries, to break away from European powers and their political and religious influence was counterproductive. The lecturer counter-argues that Cixi’s act had a good intent, which is to liberate China from foreign control, and 精选动词很重要:defends Cixi by stating that the express accepted the responsibility and showed acceptance to foreigners.

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