雅思柱形图写作

小作文：柱形图

大作文：To what extent do you think societies benefit from the contact and closer relationship with foreigners brought about by international business and tourism? 国际旅游业和国际商贸使国家之间联系增加，关系紧密，社会可从中受益，是否认同?

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Today, more and more developing countries are expanding tourist industry. Why is it the case? Do you regard it as positive or negative? 为什么很多国家发展旅游业，你认为好还是不好?

Societies benefit from the increasing contact and closer relationship brought about from the international tourism and business. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 国际旅游业和国际商贸使国家之间联系增加，关系紧密，社会可从中受益，是否认同?(2010年6月17日旧题重现)

主题观点：国家商贸和国家旅游的发展对于国家的影响是利大于弊

原创范文：

首段：背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场

当我们在雅思柱形图写作中练习如何权衡数据背后的趋势时，现实世界中的国际商贸与旅游也呈现出类似的多面性。过去几十年，国家间的联系因贸易往来和人口流动而日益紧密，旅游业更是被许多资源丰富的国家视为经济引擎。然而，这种繁荣究竟是福音还是隐患，始终众说纷纭。就我而言，国际旅游与商务带来的频繁接触和紧密关系，对各个社会的积极影响远大于其消极面。

二段： 国际商贸和国际旅游繁荣的利好：

Seen from the positive perspective, international trade greatly conduces to all participants. More precisely, the booming international trade can perfectly integrate different countries’ resources, which helps many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other's strengths. Likewise, the prosperity of international tourism has benefited many nations and every individual traveler. To be more specific, the development of global tourism could generate immense economic value. South Africa could serve as a perfect example, which used to poverty-stricken and less well-known place. As tourism booms, it now becomes one of the most eye-catching scenic spots. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek hotels, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and creates job opportunities. As for every individual, the closer relationship among different countries provides them with a golden chance to savor happiness, expand mind and enjoy life.

点评：

1. The booming international trade can perfectly integrate different countries’ resources, which helps many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other's strengths 国际贸易的繁荣整合了不同国家的各种资源，使资源共享，实现了优势互补。

2. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek hotels, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and creates job opportunities. 游客观光的时候，购物，餐饮，住宿，因此，旅游业的繁荣可以刺激经济发展以及创造就业机会。

3. to savor happiness, expand mind and enjoy life 品味生活，开拓视野以及享受人生

三段：国际贸易和国际旅游繁荣的潜在弊端：

It is certainly true that the downsides of developing international tourism or business should never be ignored. For one thing, when it comes to tourism, million of flowing sightseers might trigger a series of destruction of the natural environment of those hot scenic spots. For another, cultural taboo induced by the prosperity of tourism may aggravate the conflicts between locals and visitors and even causes some frauds and hostilities. On the side of the international trade, the fierce competitions deriving from foreign countries might impose an economic burden on state-owned enterprises. Even worse, international speculations and risks invariably ensue.

点评：

1. trigger a series of destruction of the natural environment of those hot scenic spots. 对于热门旅游景区的自然环境造成一系列破坏

2. cultural taboo induced by the prosperity of tourism 旅游业发展带来的文化禁忌

3. cause some frauds and hostilities. 引起一些欺诈行为以及敌意

4. impose an economic burden on state-owned enterprises 对于国有企业带来经济压力

5. international speculations and risks invariably ensue.国际投机行为和国际风险不可避免地随之而来

尾段：

总而言之，正如在雅思柱形图写作中我们既要看峰值也要看谷底，国际商贸与旅游的发展同样有利有弊，是一把双刃剑。但只要辅以合理的管理、规范与引导，其对国家和社会进步的推动力不容小觑。因此，我坚持认为，全球化背景下的这种紧密联系总体上让社会受益匪浅。