机考真题小作文示范写作 | 地图某剧场的布局变化

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The plans below show a small theatre in 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

主体段分段方法1:一图一段

主体段分段方法2: 按照<方位>分段

(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

主体1：北部

主体2：中央、南部

开头段

The maps illustrate changes in the layout of a theater in 2010 and 2012.

概述段

Overall, this theater underwent significant changes during the period. With the expansion and introduction of several facilities, the theatre became better equipped to serve both visitors and staff.

思路要点：

- 这个剧院的布局变化显著

- 部分设施扩建，这个剧院在观众服务、职工活动方面更便利

Body paragraph 1

In the upper section, there was a dressing room in 2010, which was reduced in size and converted into a corridor in 2012. Meanwhile, the stageimmediately to the south was expanded. In addition, the original storage area in the top-left cornerwas replaced by a dressing room and a shower area, while a new storage areawas addedin the top-right corner.

思路要点：上半部分

- 2010年最顶部是一个化妆间(dressing room)→2012年面积缩小，改建成了走廊(corridor)

- 它南边的舞台(stage)被扩建

- 左上角的存储间(storage room)被改建成一个化妆间(dressing room)和淋浴间(space for showers)

- 右上角新建了一个化妆间(dressing room)

Body paragraph 2

Turning to the southern section, the auditorium in the centreremained largely unchanged, whereas the previous administrative officewas relocated further north, where it was enlarged and positioned adjacent to the auditorium. A restaurant was newly built in the southwestern corner, occupying the site of the former ticket office. The main entranceremained in the same position, while the initial cafein the bottom-right cornerwas converted into a new ticket office.