机考真题小作文示范写作 | 动态表 不同年龄段人口数量
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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
主体段分段方法：按照<趋势>分段
Body 1：total、40-64、65+
Body 2：15-39、under-15
开头段
The table compares the populations of New Zealand across four age groups in 2011 and 2012.
概述段
Overall, the total population experienced a rising trend, with an increase in the number of people aged over 40, while the reverse was true for the two younger groups. The 65-and-over group remained the smallest, despite recording by far the most substantial growth.
思路要点：
- 总人口上升
- 40岁以上人口数量上升，40岁以下人口数量下降
- 65+人口一直，但上涨幅度
Body paragraph 1
Looking at the information in more detail, the overall population grew marginally from 4,381,269 in 2011 to 4,410,284 in 2012, representing an increase of 0.6%. The same trend could be seen in the age group of 40-to-64, with the figure rising from 1,331,907 to 1,339,898 over the same period. A much more pronounced growth was seen among those aged 65 and over, whose population grew by 4%, reaching 596,903 in 2012.
思路要点：total、40-64、65+
- 总人口：从2011年的4,381,269小幅上升到2012年的4,410,284，涨幅为0.6%
- 40-64：也上涨0.6%，从1,331,907上升到1,339,898
- 65+：急剧上升了4%，2012年达到596,90
Body paragraph 2
However, the two younger age groups exhibited slight declines in population. Although the 15-39-year-olds constituted the largest age group in both years, their number fell slightly from 1,577,256 in 2011 to 1,574,102 in 2012, a drop of 0.2%. Similarly, there was a decline of 0.2% in the number of under-15s, from 898,160 in 2011 to 896,364 one year later.
思路要点：15-39、under-15
- 15-39：人口数量始终，但从2011年的1,577,256小幅下降了0.2%，达到 1,574,102
- under-15：也下降了0.2%，从2011年的898,160下降到2012年的896,364
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