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考研英语大作文现象类问题:子女赡养老人分析
2020-09-16 14:43   作者:新航道   阅读量:

  Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

       1)describe the drawing briefly,

       2)interpret its intended meaning, and

       3)give your comments.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points)


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  【审题】题目要求:描述图片图片内容:love, young and aged mother  寓意:gratitude , filial piety

  这幅图是2014年考研英语的大作文题目,不难看到图画下方写着“相携”二字,所以题目考察的是赡养老人的问题。可以联想到2005年大作文考了类似内容,对比如下:


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  【审题】题目要求:描述图片 图片内容:helpless father,three sons and a daughter,none of them is willing to receive their father 寓意:conscience,filial piety 2005年的这幅图是可怜的老父亲缩成了一只皮球,四个儿女守着四个 球门,老人被儿女们踢来踢去。两幅图都考察一个重点就是子女对老人的赡养问题。 以2014年(上述第一幅图) 为例来具体分析,写作框架仍然采取标准三段式来写。 第一段图画描述段的写作内容主要是描述图画,需包括两点:三十年前是个什么样子,现在是什么样子。三十年前“我”还是个孩子,母亲大手拉小手陪伴着我成长;现在,母亲上年纪了,我陪伴在母亲的身旁。图的重心应该是在右边一幅,突出的是子女长大后要关爱、感恩父母。


  第二段是图画内涵阐释段。首先用一句话阐释图片内涵,然后用事实对该内涵进行阐释。可正面举例说明社会存在这样良好的风尚,也可以从反面说明当前社会中人们忽视了对父母的关爱和回报。 第三段是评论段,写作内容可以给出自己的评论和建议。可以指出年轻人应该把尊重和照顾年迈的父母视为一种道义责任。也可以从细节出发,年轻人在生活中如何做到孝顺父母。只有这样,我们的家庭才能和睦,社会才能更加和谐。 【2014年大作文范文展示】 【描述图片】As can been seen, love between a mother and a daughter is reflected by the drawing: in the left one, a young and amiable mother is holding one hand of her little daughter, while [对比关系] in the right photo, when [when引导的时间状语从句] the mother is aged, her daughter, who [定语从句] has grown up, is supporting her, just as the mother did thirty years ago.【图画内涵】Just as the caption below summarizes, the implication conveyed in the picture is self-evident: we need to show our concern and love to our parents. 【主题句】 However [转折关系], most of us fail to do this job. As our pace of life gallops along, increasingly our society is seeing [以地名以及时间作主语都可以用see/witness 表示“见证”] a decline in traditional moral values. It is revealed in the fact that we always put back filial piety. [同位语从句:fact抽象名词作先行词] As young men now deem the career as the priority, they often choose to migrate with their jobs, and work around the clock, leaving parents in empty-nests. Besides[递进关系], many people are used to substituting [substitute] their care for parents with money or gifts. While it is beyond dispute that material support can improve our parents’ living standards, what these aged people need most is [what 引导主语从句]company and love from us, such as a simple call, a short time at home.【评价以及建议】It is easy to draw this conclusion that [it是形式主语,that 引导主语从句], to our parents, nothing can be better than the filial piety from children. Whenever possible, we should gather around the table for a “reunion dinner” with our parents; whether busy or not, we need to give our parents a call and tell them we are fine. Only with our full awareness of caring our parents with gratitude can our parents lead a really happy life. [部分倒装:only+介词短语+助动词/系动词/情态动词+主语] 【万能句型】1. As can been seen, … is reflected by the drawing: ….2. Just as the caption below summarizes, the implication conveyed in the picture is self-evident: ….3. As our pace of life gallops along, increasingly our society is seeing ….4. It is revealed in the fact that ….5. While it is beyond dispute that …, ….6. It is easy to draw this conclusion that ….7. Only with our full awareness of … can …


  建议同学们平时多积累一些常用句型,这样可以节省考场上的思考时间奥!


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