托福写作185题库之第128题范文

128. Should we spend all school day studying or set aside some time for

exercising?

Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people

believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you

agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

『分析』

同意前者更容易写一些。

• 身体健康对每个人都很重要，并且是学习进步的前提

• 体育训练可以使学生学到很多东西，比如团队精神

• 合理的课程设置是学校的责任，学校应该想办法保证学生的健康

『范文』

Some people believe that it is important to have physical activities as part of a child's everyday curriculum at

school. Others disagree, and argue that students should spend all of their time on academic studies. Personally, I

believe that physical education is a vital part of an education as it teaches children to take care of their bodies, how

to work as a team, and gives them a method of releasing tension and aggression.

Humans have always known about the importance of taking care of our bodies, but it seems that in recent

years, we have gradually forgotten this important fact. It is absolutely necessary to get some physical activity at least

a few times a week, and engraining this idea into children when they are young is the best way to ensure their

health for life.

Physical exercise usually involves teamwork of some sort. Much of the exercise that young people get

involves games such as basketball, volleyball, or football. All of these sports teach children how to work together

to achieve a common goal, in this case, winning. I also believe that allowing the children to work together in a fun

environment, rather than only on academic projects, brings a stronger sense of camaraderie, which helps the children

to have healthy relationships with others.

Finally, physical exercise is an excellent way to release tension and aggression. If one is particularly stressed

about school or life, getting exercise can help the person to relax. As for letting out aggression, it is much healthier

to kick a football than it is to hit someone who has made you angry.

Exercise should definitely be a part of a student's education. Exercise has much more to offer than simply

getting "a break" from academics. Physical exercise can balance out a student's hectic life, and make it much more

pleasurable.