独立写作真题范文 | 三两招突破独立写作系列(三)

   　新航道托福《教程》是入门托福写作的“良品”我们以94页的题目为例，(通过主体部分的一个段落)快速学会一些构建复合句的招式。

　　* The first reason is simple, and it is about life quality. 写段落中心句的时候，通过连词and建立的平行关系，构建两个简单的“主—系—表”句子的符合，并且前后两个句子形成信息的递进关系。

　　* A person who is generous in his or her expense of money may live his or her life to the fullest. 对于主语a person做定语从句的修饰，就可以把人的行为和结果放到一个复合句里说明白了。同时，这个句子还可以以另一个复合句形式呈现：If a person is generous in his or her expense of money, the person may live his or her life to the fullest. 这个句子中，把人的行文放到了条件状语从句里，构建了一个“条件—结果”复合句。

　　* Otherwise, life may be dull and awkward. 两个复合句之后，不要继续复合句了，此处简单句为宜。

　　* For example, money may be spent on purchasing goods, bringing us material comfort. 进入举例的部分，这一句，通过伴随状语来构建复合句。

　　* A woolen blanket, for cold temperatures, may be costly but quite cozy, or good pair of shoes may be expensive but nice to the feet. 通过连词or建立的平行关系，构建两个简单的“主—系—表”句子的符合，前后两个句子所描述的情况形成平行关系。

　　* In addition, money may be used to purchase services, particularly entertainment, which creates fun. 这个句子中，通过最后的非限定性定语从句构建复合句，引出“fun”这个花钱的好处。

　　* It is obvious that people need spiritual enjoyment in their lives. 通过形式主语It去指代后面的由that引导的名词性从句构建复合句。此处“福利“：形式主语是因为英语句子(普遍说来)的习惯是“头轻脚重”，是“头小尾大”。

　　* Such a style of life contrasts sharply with the plain andfrugal one. 同样地，复合句连续出现之后，需要简单句来调剂一下。

　　* As money is saved, the comfort or fun may be reduced. 通过as引导的状语从句构建复合句。

　　* In other words, a person who is stingy or conservative about spending would rather make do, with very limited material, and bear the boredom. 至此，是不是可以从前面的展示中找到这个复合句的构建复合的方式?但是，好像还有一些部分搞不清楚?没事，我们的栏目会在后面的episodes中慢慢覆盖。

　　* However, the awkwardness deprives the person of the many possibilities of life. 简单句。