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托福写作常见错误例文

2012-07-17 00:00     作者 :    

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   阅读下面的一段文章(摘自一个考生的综合写作作文)

  Some method of irrigation not efficient. For example, flooding a field with water.

  The water it collects on the field in a pond then evaporate or passing into groundwater.

  So waste a lot of water. Sprinkler system spray water on crops, this is better than flooding however they also waste water. Because use a lot of water they waste.

  Generally speaking, surface method of irrigation are not efficient in using water.

  这段文章中有许多句子结构错误。有些错误使句子含义不清楚,使作者的意图不明确。你能找a这些错误吗?

  现在阅读没有错误的同一段落。

  Some methods of irrigation are not efficient. One example is flooding a field with water. The water collects on the field in a pond and then evaporates or passes into

  groundwater, which wastes a lot of water. Sprinkler systems spray water on crops,

  which is better than flooding; however, they also waste water. Generally speaking,

  surface methods of irrigation are not efficient in using water.

  在新托福考试中,托福写作作文可以有一些小的语言错误,如果这些错误不至使文章意思不清仍然可以得高分。但是,假使存在很多错误使得文章意思不明确,结果将是低分。

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