雅思小作文示范写作 ：地图两种厨房平面图对比

主体段分段：一图一段

开头段

The two maps illustrate the layouts of two kitchens, comparing their size, structure and internal facilities. 

概述段

Overall, both kitchens contain essential elements such as cupboards, a frozen area, and facility rooms. Kitchen B is considerably larger, featuring additional facilities including more cupboards, additional facility rooms, and a dining area.

思路要点：

- 两个厨房都有cupboard、frozen area、facility room

- Kitchen B面积更大，有更多的cupboard和一个餐饮区

Body paragraph 1

Kitchen A measures 3 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. The entrance is located in the top left corner, adjacent to a frozen area. The left side of the kitchen is dominated by two cupboards: a smaller square one and a larger L-shaped one. A third cupboard is positioned in the top-right corner, directly above a washing room. Further south is another L-shaped cupboard. At the bottom of the kitchen is a rectangular facility room, with two chopping spaces nearby.

思路要点：Kitchen A

- Kitchen长3米，宽2.5米

- entrance位于左上角，毗邻frozen area

- 左侧有两个cupboard（一个小面积、正方形，另一个大面积、L形）

- 右上角有另一个cupboard，它位于WC北边；再往南是另一个L形的cupboard

- 底部是facility room，附近有两片chopping space

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, Kitchen B is more spacious at 5 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. Immediately inside the entrance on the top-left section is a rectangular table with chairs. Unlike Kitchen A, the upper-left corner is occupied by a cupboard, while a larger frozen area is placed at the top-right. Similar to the design of Kitchen A, the left side also houses two cupboards, with another three located on the opposite side. However, the W/C is positioned on the southern edge, just next to two separate facility rooms. As in Kitchen A, two chopping areas are situated on both sides of the kitchen, although they take up more space.

思路要点：Kitchen B

- 左上角entrance入口进入，有一个table，周围有chairs

- 与Kitchen A不同，左上角是一个cupboard，但一个更大尺寸的frozen area位于右上角

- 与Kitchen A相似，左侧也有两个cupboard，对面是另外的三个cupboard

- W/C位于底部，临近两个单独的facility room

- 两组chopping space位于左边、右边，但面积更大，有助于提高效率  

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