3月7日雅思小作文示范写作 | 动态柱组合 三种航空公司收费对比

The bar charts compare the ticket prices charged by three airlines based in City H for flights to four African cities (Cairo, Lagos, Nairobi, and Cape Town) in October and December of 2017.

概述段

Overall, all three airlines increased their prices, with flights to Cape Town consistently charging the highest in both months. Among them, Airline C remained the priciest option to all four cities, while Airline A was the most economical choice.

思路要点：

- ABC价格都上升

-三种航班去Cape Town的价格都

- C两个月份收费都，A两个月份收费都

 In October, Airline C’s fare to Cape Town was the highest at $470, closely followed by its fees for Cairo at $450 and Lagos at $420. Conversely, only $400 was charged for Nairobi. Airline B followed a similar pattern, with Cape Town remaining the most expensive destination ($400) and Nairobi the cheapest ($330). Airline A, by contrast, offered the most economical flights to all four cities, with fares ranging from $280 to $350.

思路要点：October

- Airline C：去Cape Town的航班收费($470)，Cairo第二($450)，Lagos 第三($420)，Nairobi仅为$400

- Airline B：和Airline B相同的收费排名，Cape Town收费依旧($400)、Nairobi($330)

- Airline A：四个城市的航班收费，区间范围是$280(Nairobi)到$350(Cape Town)

 Body paragraph 2

 Two months later, all three airlines saw a rise in their prices to all four destinations. Airline C’s flight to Cape Town saw the most pronounced increase to $650, with its fees for the remaining three cities growing by roughly $150 in December. The other two airlines experienced similar growth: Airline B's fares rose slightly to between $450 and $550, whereas Airline A's prices remained the lowest, staying below $500 for each destination. 

思路要点：December

- 三家航司去四个地方的机票费都涨价了

- Airline C：到Cape Town机票价格上涨最显著，达到$650，到其他三个地方的机票费用上涨了大约$150

- Airline A和Airline B增幅类似

- Airline B票价上涨到$450至$550之间，但Airline A的票价依旧，都在$500以下

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