6月6日雅思小作文示范写作 | 地图 某校园布局变化

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　　The plans show how part of a university campus looked 10 years ago and now.

　　主体分段方法1：按照<方位>分段（本篇文章采用此种分段方法）

　　主体1：西部

　　主体2：东部

　　主体分段方法2：一图一段

　　开头段

　　The maps compare the layout of a university campus as it was ten years ago and at present.

　　概述段

　　Overall, this campus has experienced significant modificationsduring the given period, featuringthe expansion ofeducational and residential facilities at the expense of green spaces.

　　思路要点：

　　- 变化显著

　　- 教学设施、宿舍楼扩建，绿地变少

　　Body paragraph 1

　　The road networkhas remained unchanged, with a north-southroad intersectingan east-westroute and dividing the campus into four areas. In the northwestern part, the music center and libraryhave remained in their original locations, whilethe business school buildinghas been significantly expanded. The wooded areato the eastof these buildings was cleared completely. In the southwestern corner stood an art center in the original plan, which is still there in today’s layout.

　　思路要点：西部

　　- 10年前，一条南北走向马路(南方通往train station)与road bridge相交，将所给定区域划分成四个部分

　　- 西北部分：music center、library保持不变，business school扩建;green space消失

　　- 西南角：art center保持不变

　　Body paragraph 2

　　The eastern sectionhas undergone more substantial redevelopment. A footpathhas continued to connect the western and eastern sections, and the adjacentblock of student accommodation has also remained unchanged. However, the green spacesto its easthave shrunk dramatically, making room for four additional student flats and a cafe. Acrossthe road bridgeto the south, a computer centerhas been newly constructed.

　　思路要点：东部

　　- 东部变化更为显著

　　- student flats不变

　　- green space面积大幅度缩减看，新建四个小的student flats和一个cafe

　　- 南边、road bridge对面：新建一个computer center