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The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016.

主体段分段方法：按照饼分段

主体1：Stansted Airport、Luton Airport

主体2：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family was the dominant reason for travel, constituting 48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel was the next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation. By contrast, business travel comprised under one-fifth at each airport, while trips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要点：

- 四个机场的 visiting friends and family members、Holiday占比都较高

- business占比都较低

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family was the dominant reason for travel, constituting 48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel was the next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation. By contrast, business travel comprised under one-fifth at each airport, while trips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要点：Stansted Airport、 Luton Airport

- 这两个机场蓝色(visiting friends and family)占比都，分别为48%和47%

- 两个机场排名第二位的都是黄色(holiday)，分别为36%和34%

- 绿色(business)占比都不超过20%，红色(other)都仅占2%，

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The remaining two airports, however, demonstrated different patterns. At Gatwick, holiday travel accounted for the largest proportion, at 54%. Visits to friends and family represented 30%, roughly twice the share of business-related travel. In comparison, holiday trips and social visits were equally popular at Heathrow Airport, each accounting for 35%. About a quarter of passengers travelled for business (26%), which was more than four times the figure for other purposes (4%).

思路要点：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

- Gatwick Airport：黄色(holiday)占比(54%)；蓝色(visiting families and friends)占比30%，大约是绿色(business)的2倍

- Heathrow Airport：黄色(holiday)、蓝色(visiting families and friends)占比相同(35%)；绿色(business)占比26%，大约是红色(other)的4倍