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he table below shows the number of visitors going to the heritage sites in six regions in the Australia from 1996 to 2000.

主体段分段方法：按照【变化幅度】分段

主体1：New South Wales、Tasmania (变化显著)

主体2：其余四个地区（变化幅度较小）

开头段

The table provides information on the number of tourists visiting heritage sites across six regions in Australia over three years: 1996, 1998, and 2000.

概述段

Overall, all six states experienced an increase in the number of visitors to heritage sites, with New South Wales exhibiting the most notable growth. In contrast, tourist attractions in Tasmania remained the least visited throughout the period.

思路要点：

- 六个地区游客量都上升

- New South Wales涨幅

- Tasmania数值始终

Body paragraph 1

It is clear that two regions recorded significant changes in visitor numbers. In New South Wales, merely 23,000 tourists visited cultural sites in 1996, but this figure surged to 458,000 after two years, overtaking all the other regions and becoming the most visited state. The final two years(1998 to 2000) saw a marginal climb to 492,000. Similarly, the number of visitors to Tasmania, which started at 94,000 in 1996, underwent a steady increase, rising to 120,000 by 2000.

思路要点：New South Wales、Tasmania

- New South Wales：1996年游客数量仅为23,000→1998年急剧上升到458,000，成为六个地区中游客数量最多的地区→到2000年小幅度上升到492,000

- Tasmania：1996年的94,000 in 1996→逐步上升到2000年达到120,000

Body paragraph 2

However, such dramatic changes were not observed in the remaining four areas. In Victoria and Queensland, the number of visitors increased by roughly 6000, reaching 453,000 and 417,000 by 2000. In contrast, there was a slower growth in South Australia and Western Australia, with tourist numbers rising from 225,000 to 261,000 and from 189,000 to 224,000 respectively.

思路要点：其余四个地区

- 其余四个地区游客数量变化幅度较小

- Victoria、Queensland：都持续上升了6000左右，到2000年分别达到453,000和417,000

- South Australia、Western Australia：上升幅度都较小，分别从225,000 上升到261,000、从189,000 上升到224,000.

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