3月14日雅思小作文示范写作 | 地图 澳洲某地布局变迁

The maps illustrate changes in a market called Garden Market in Australia, comparing its layout in 1995 with the present day.

Overall, this market has experienced significant changes over the period shown. With increased mechanization and the introduction of new crops, it has developed into a more modernized facility.

It is clear that this market occupies a rectangular area, surrounded by green land to the north and east. In the southwestern corner, a storage shed has been converted into a house. The small cottage to its right has been removed to make space for a tractor parking area, just below a new herb field. Further to the right was a larger farmhouse, which remains unchanged in the present plan. In the central section, a former strawberry field has been completely replaced by beans. Similarly, the apple field to its easthas been transformed into a glasshouse.

In the northern section, there was a strawberry field in the top-left corner in 1995, with areas for workers and tomatoes to its right. Now, although the strawberry section remains largely unchanged, more tractors are placed in the northeastern corner for harvesting, occupying the initial worker's are. Similarly, a larger field for herbs has replaced the former tomato area. 

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