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In order to be successful in sport, some people think that it is essential to have a good coach. Others say that natural ability is more important.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】
An individual with limited natural ability is unlikely to become a world-class athlete, even with excellent coaching. Conversely, even the most naturally gifted competitor may never reach the highest level without expert guidance and systematic training.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这两个句子分析了“个人能力”和“教练”各自的重要性。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
这个句子可以结尾总结的部分,对应的结论是两者同等重要,缺一不可。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“athlete”是名词,表示“无处不在”。
“coaching”是名词,表示“(体育运动、工作或技能的)训练”。
“conversely”是副词,表示“相反地”。
“systematic”是形容词,表示“有系统的”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
第一个句子的主语是an individual with limited natural ability其中with引导的介词短语是后置定语修饰an individual,系动词is之后是表语unlikely,to become a world-class athlete不定式短语作形容词unlikely的补足语,逗号之后是介词短语even with excellent coaching作为状语。第二个句子最开始是状语conversely,句子的主语是even the most naturally gifted competitor,谓语是may never reach,最后是宾语the highest level,以及介词短语without expert guidance and systematic training.
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