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支招小作文 | 惊了!表里没几个数字~

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    雅思小作文题目

  The table below shows the changes of the percentage of visitors in 8 great countries that most international tourists visited in 2009 and 2010.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  惊了?惊了!见惯了满眼数字的表,没见过表里仅有8个数字。很慌,很方,很正常。

  定睛一看,分组其实依然很明晰:

  1. 正数 即增长的(有多有少);

  2. 负数 即下降的;

  3. 零 即没变的。

  范文及解析

  In the table is the statistical presentation ← “数据化呈现”,是一种高bigger的说法 of the changed popularity with visitors, in percentage terms ←“以百分比计算”, of 8 Great Countries between 2009 and 2010.

  Except the UK, 引导数值的从句句型之一(定语从句)→ which saw a 4-percent slightslip in the number of visitors, and France, whose popularity stayed unchanged,←考虑到“负数组”仅一个,“零组”也仅有一个,所以干脆上来就把这两个写完,然后专心写“正数组”→ the other countries witnessed either a surge or amarginal increase of popularity. Germany stood out, 引导数值的从句句型之二(状语从句)→ as its number of tourists shot up, and had the fastest growth. In the US and China, the other two most desired tourist destinations, the number of visitors also grew fast ←要敢于不写具体数字,而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势. Meanwhile, the 6-percent growth in Spain is also noticeable, and the insignificant growth in Turkey and Italy ← 要敢于不写具体数字,而用表示程度的形容词或者副词去描述状态/趋势 contrasted sharply with the three previous countries.

  Overall, the change of popularity between the two years varied markedly from one country to another.


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