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雅思写作柱状图怎么破!

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  The bar chart below shows the percentages of males between 16 and 25 years old who watched and participated six kinds of sports in 2014.

  

雅思写作柱状图怎么破!

 

  【para 1- 概述柱图信息——对比:“同时(2014)不同项(watching & participating)”】

  Shown in the bar chart are the proportion of male viewers aged between 16 and 25 who watched six types of sports and their corresponding participation in these sports in 2014.

  语言点小结:

  1. 倒装句: 注意其中包含的be动词的使用

  2. 词汇使用:同义替换+词性替换

  【para 2- 数值分组——组1: tennis & swimming—细致描述各自特征:1. tennis:唯一一组蓝色柱子(watching项)比例超过橙色柱子(participating项), 且前者为所有项目中数值最大项;2. swimming:橙色柱子(participating项)单项中数值最大,且两柱之间的差异(20%)与tennis的两项差异相同 】

  Tennis and swimming both draw immediate attention, as one had the largest viewing figure, attracting 50% of audiences, while the other witnessed the highest participation rate(40%). It is also worth mentioning that tennis was the only sports whose viewing figure had an apparent advantage over the participation rate. Meanwhile, a similar gap of 20% was also observed between the two figures for swimming.

  语言点小结:

  1. 句子主语的变化

  2. 指代词的使用

  3. 词汇替换

  4. 伴随状语

  5. 定语从句

  【para 3- 组2: 剩余四项运动组——特征相似,都是橙色柱子(participating项)超过蓝色柱子(watching项)。于是乎,写作篇幅也被压缩了。】

  A common situation could be found in the four remaining sports, basketball, football, cycling and walking. Specifically, the percentages of audiences watching them were within a narrow range of 8% to 20%, while the participation rates were all slightly larger, with the figures ranging from 15% to 25%.

  语言点小结:

  1. 同位语成分

  2. With引导的独立主格结构

  【para 4-结尾】

  To sum up, male spectators were more likely to take part in these six types of sports that are studied than were they to watch them, with an exception found in tennis.

  语言点小结:

  1. 词汇替换

  2. 定语从句

  3. 倒装结构

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