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支招雅思小作文 I 动态柱图 不同年龄段花费对比

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 [2023/ 10/ 7] The chart shows the expenditure in three categories as the proportion of the total spending by UK citizens in 2004 according to their age.

 

  【主体段分段】:按照消费类别分段

  【开头段】

  The bar chart compares five age groups in terms of their expenditure on three different items in the year 2004.

  【概述段】

  It is noticeable that the largest proportion of spending was on entertainment among people younger than 75, while the oldest age group spent more on food and drinks.

  思路要点:

  - 75岁以下的人:entertainment花费

  - 75+的人:food and drinks花费

  【Body 1】

  People younger than 74 years old spent more on entertainment than other two items, with the figures ranging from 11%(by the under 30s) to 17%(by the 64-74-year-olds). However, for people older than 75, they only spent 6% on this category. Although the least percentage of money(6%) was spent on food and drinks by people under 30, people of other age groups chose to spend a higher percentage of money on this item. Obviously, the cost of foods by the oldest age group ranked the first place among all the age groups, with the figure of 17%.

  思路要点:绿色+蓝色

  - 绿色(entertainment ):

  - 74岁之前:都,数值范围从11%到17%

  - 75+:只有6%

  - 蓝色(food and drinks):

  - under 30只有6%, 其他年龄组的人花费较高

  - 在75+:所有年龄组中在这个方面花费,为17%

  【Body 2】

  It is also clear that the youngest group spent more money on restaurant and hotel than other age groups, with the figure of roughly 9%. By contrast, only 4% of money was spent on this item by people over 75 years old, which was the smallest among all the expenditure by this group of people. People of the other three age groups shared the same figure in the spending on this aspect, at 6%.

  思路要点:红色(restaurant and hotel)

  - under 30:红色的比例是所有年龄组中的(9%)

  - 75+:4%,是这个年龄组中花费最少的比例

  - 其他3个年龄组的人在此方面花费比例相同(6%)

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