如果你每次练习或考试的时候都心心念念着这三个部分,你就一定可以把小作文写好!
【写小作文时你的思考步骤】
这里我给大家剖析一下我在写小作文时的思考步骤。
The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
在我考虑要怎么写之前,更重要的是读懂题目信息和决定如何组织文章结构。我是这么想的。
【步】:我可以在开头段用一句话来复述(或者说翻译)题目。
【第二步】:我观察一下总体趋势。可以看到food/drinks/tobacco这三类有的百分比,
leisure/education是的,我可以把这个特点写进概述段。
【第三步】：现在我要写两段描述段了。我需要把每个国家都提一句。记住,选择什么去写并没有固定规则,每个人可以写不同的。
【第四步】:在每个类别里找到值:可以看到Turkey的food/drinks/tobacco和education/leisure比例都是的,而同时Italy的clothing/footwear的比例是的。
【第五步:】所以我在第三段挑了Turkey和Italy来写。
【第六步】:我第四段写了Ireland, Spain和Sweden。
【第七步:】在第四段中我会提到Ireland的Food/Drinks/Tobacco的比例很高(排第二)
Spain在education/leisure中的比例,同时Sweden在类和第二类都是的。
【第八步】四段写完不用再写总结了,因为第二段已经总结过了。
来看一下完整的范文:
The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.
It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.
Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32. 14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4. 35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.
It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1. 98%.
