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【2023/ 4/ 29】 The chart below shows the international applicants to universities in one of European countries from four different countries from 2004 to 2008.

题型:动态柱图

时态:过去时态

主体段分段:

<方法1>:按照国家分段

China+USA一段

Japan+Russia一段

<方法2>:按照时间分段 (本篇文章采用此种分段方法)

【开头段】

The bar chart compares China, Japan, Russia and USA in terms of students who applied to universities in one European country between 2004 and 2008.

【概述段】

It is clear that throughout the given period, this European country attracted less Russian students in comparison with those from the other three countries. Meanwhile, the number of applicants from Japan and USA increased, while that of Chinese candidates showed a downward trend.

***用国家作主语,增加表达灵活性

【Body 1】

In the beginning 2 years, China remained the leading place of origin for international students, although its figure declined noticeably from 28000 to 22000. By contrast, these two years witnessed a remarkable growth in the figures for prospective students from Japan and USA, with the figures falling to 8000 and 14000 respectively. In both years, only roughly 4000 Russian students hoped to study in this given European country for their college years.

***用人作主语,增加表达灵活性

本段思路:[2004~2005年]

China:最多,下降趋势

Japan和USA:显著上升

Russia:数量不变

【Body 2】

In the subsequent 2 years, the number of applications from USA soared to nearly 28000, overtaking the figure for Chinese applicants in 2006. Conversely, a marked drop by 800 could be found in the figure for students who came from China. During the same period, there were no significant changes to the number of applications from Japan and Russia.

本段思路:[2006~2007年]

USA:急剧上升;于2006年和China有交点

China:显著下降

Japan、Russia:基本不变

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