是否成功只能用赚钱多少来考量。
Agree:
- high earners praised
- provides security
- makes dreams happen
Disagree:
- effort counts
- accomplishment are key
- full life is success
Topic sentence
- I disagree with the statement that a person’s success in life can only be measured by money.
Supporting sentences
- Although as a society we often judge people by their professions and how much money they earn, it does not
cover the whole story of success
- Fulfilling a dream can also be called success
Closing sentence (optional)
- Most of all, we can measure a person’s success by the healthy relationships they form with family and friends and by their satisfaction in the work that supports their daily needs.
I disagree with the statement that a person’s success in life can only be measured by money. Although as a society we often judge people by their professions and how much money they earn, it does not cover the whole story of success. For example, someone who works hard to open a business is more successful than one who simply inherits it from a successful parent. Furthermore, fulfilling a dream of starting a business, singing in a choir or traveling to place one has always hope to see can be called success. Most of all, we can measure a person’s success by the healthy relationships people form with family and friends and by their satisfaction in the work that supports their daily needs.
