职业运动员和演员拿到几百万美金的工作报酬时，有人觉得他们拿得太多了。
Agree:
- train and work hard
- support many business
- risk injury and career loss
Disagree:
- other profession more important
- other create the star
- talent not unique
Topic sentence
- Entertainers and athletes rely on talents that not everyone has and so I agree that they deserve their high salaries.
Supporting sentences
- Not only are they talented, but also they have often spent most of their lives preparing for their roles.
- Dedication also helps many other people around them make money.
- They risk injuries such as loss of voice or damage to their bodies that shorten careers.
Closing sentence (optional)
- Since their talent contributes to economic success of so many businesses, I do not believe their high salaries are out of line.
Entertainers and athletes rely on their talents that not everyone has and so I agree with that they deserve their high salaries. Not only are they talented, but also they have often spent most of their lives preparing for their roles. For example, athletes train their sport skills and keep fit. Entertainers must constantly train their voices, acting technique or musical talent. Their dedication also helps many other people around them make money. Their name sells ticket in places they perform, products they sell and endorse. After all, they risk injuries such as loss of voice of damage to their bodies that shorten careers. Since their talent contributes to economic success of so many businesses, I do not believe their high salaries are out of line.
