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托福写作185题库之第53题范文

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  53. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  写作思路:

  53、不同意工作的最重要的部分是挣到的钱

  (1)多挣到钱并不能抵消工作中的压力

  (2)在工作中可以得到的快乐和满足不能用钱衡量

  (3)为挣钱长时间的加班工作会影响生活

  参考范文:

I understand that nowadays it is important for people to earn a lot of money. As a matter of fact, many people equate money with success: the more money you earn, the more successful you are. However, financial aspect is not the most important aspect of a job. The work environment and camaraderie with one’s coworkers, the personal fulfillment from one’s occupation, and the opportunity to balance one’s professional and personal lives are much more important. 

 

People who spend forty hours a week or more at their place of employment should not spend any amount of time in a room or a building with people who one does not respect, who are unpleasant, or even worse, hostile. Otherwise, the situation will most probably have a negative effect on one’s mental health or disposition. A few more dollars in the bank account can not compensate for this.

 

Similarly, one should derive a special fulfillment or pleasure from one’s job. Normally, a person will spend one third of his/her adult time at work. One should not waste his/her time doing work that is boring or tedious even if it is well paid. The money earned will only enrich the life away from work, but not enhance the work experience.

 

Finally, the personal life can only be enjoyed adequately if there is enough time away from the professional life. Affluence affords many nice things, such as houses or cars or television sets, but a person who has to work night and day will not be able to derive any pleasure from them. Also, a father or a mother who makes a lot of money might be able to provide his or her family with a comfortable life, but how much good does that do if they never see them. Time spent with family, especially children, in invaluable, and thus a job with long hours might cost a person more than it affords.

 
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