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  Task 2

  As part of education, students should spend a period of time on studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  [就还是推荐大家埋伏笔,利用实意词的正负评价含义引导读者知悉自己的立场。如果写腻了,那不妨试试今天的设问手法]


  Should students be sent abroad for language and culture learning? The answer may be “No”. Studying abroad is not necessary, and the results may be far from satisfactory. [发现没,思考底层就还是没什么难度吧?利用好带有评价色彩的实意词]

  First, domestic education can do the job properly. Many of our teachers of foreign languages are qualified and erudite enough. Professionally trained to be instructors, they use languages with precision, flexibly adopting various teaching methods to cater for students’ need. In another word, their use of the foreign languages is like that of native speakers, and their teaching effectiveness is guaranteed by educational authorities. Since they can teach fairly well, why would we send out students overseas?


  [注意这里:反问句用作个主体段段落意群的concluding sentence, 反问求得正解,四两拨千斤] [从这儿开始,嵌入一个段落内部的小让步,然后立马驳斥]


  At this point, my opponents may argue that learning abroad provides the authentic environment for language acquisition.However, the local environment is not necessarily a favorable one. If locals speak a dialect that is far from the standard version of the language, language learning may undoubtedly beinhibited. ←注意这里,字体颜色不同,笔锋也自然转变了。句子该长长,该短短,表意清晰最重要。不要故意“作”句型(会被卡在7分以下),完全没必要。


  Second, the barrier of language learning ignored, going abroad is not only unnecessary but also ineffective. This is because anexotic culture cannot be learned like any type of knowledge. →[进入叙理轨道的句子流速要快,不要废话啰嗦瞎延伸,注意后句的pron.指代]It is so abstract that learning a culture takes long time, and the time during college is far from enough. In fact, it may take several decades for an immigrant to learn the local culture, and none of the overseas students have time of that length. // In addition, thecultural clash may happen as a disadvantageous factor in learning a foreign culture. Students sent abroad are highly likely to have already formed a strong primordial cultural identity in their motherland, which indicates they may be rejected and evenexcluded by foreign cultures. In this case, it is undesirable to have the direct contact with the foreign culture.


  In a nutshell, students need not to spend time living in other countries for learning language and culture. Neither is it necessary nor of conspicuous essence. → 背下来去套得了。

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