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4月3日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 从网上看新闻是件好事吗?

2021-04-07    浏览:55     来源:新航道官网
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2021年4月3雅思大作文题目


More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development? 


高分范文及解析


01


With news online dispersing like wildfire [独立主格作状语], the heyday of the newspaper industry and television news programs has gone. I tend to think this trend irresistible and positive [表态].This [逻辑衔接]is partly because the Internet — a vast storehouse of digital information — is convenient for people to dig for previous news, whereas [对比] neither the printed paper material nor the TV programs are easy to preserve for information searching.  


解析

Ø在段表态(positive)

Ø并点出点积极之处(信息量大,方便读者搜索以往新闻)

02


The mass quantity of news online[逻辑衔接] also benefits from its fast update speed. This [逻辑衔接] edge allows netizens to obtain any story from the blog of a witness the second it happens, which is remarkable and more importantly, life-saving when disasters happen. Newspapers and TV programs on the other hand [逻辑衔接] need time for editing, censoring, printing, and delivering, extending people’s access to news about the world to at least the next day.  


解析

Ø 第二段继续点出积极之处(更新速度快,读者能迅速获取新闻)

03


Despite these [逻辑衔接], news online is still portable, with palm-sized technological gadgets only. Typically, for people in a hurry in the morning, convenience and mobility are always preferred, and this is why [逻辑衔接] they would like to browse breaking news from a handhold phone on the subway rather than spend minutes in front of the TV or carry a thick stack of paper materials out. 


解析

Ø 乘胜追击,再点积极之处(便携)

04


However[逻辑衔接], the demerits of accessing e-news cannot be denied. To get more traffic, some news editors no longer interview in person but fabricate, releasing inauthentic news online. Consuming such information [逻辑衔接], the public is hard not to be misled.


解析

Ø转而写一点消极之处(鱼龙混杂,易被误导)

05


In conclusion, I think the growth of online newspaper is positive. The main point is that government should superintend the released information and news writers should have a fact-finding attitude.


解析

Ø 最后一段不仅是总结上文,还给出了在此基础上的一些合理建议。


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