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  * 非数据图:【流程图】

  * 类型一:【类似制作工序】

  

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  # Introduction

  Shown in the diagram is how a solar-power pump works. Overall, the process is not complex and involves only a few apparatuses // goes through only a few steps.

  * 第 一句话中下划线的部分是倒装现象,此时尤其注意动词的单复数由动词后的名词成分(才是真的主语)的单复数决定。

  * 对制作工序的流程图进行总述时,就写过程是否复杂(此图中的流程不复杂),以及可以提及用到的设备或工具多少(此图中的流程用到的设备很少)。

  # Body(访客视角)

  The first step is that the solar panel of photovoltaic cells receives and absorbs sun rays. The panel is held by a post that is rooted underground. As the panel collects the energy of the beams, it releases and transfers DC power to the bore pump, which is in the underground well and below the water level, and makes it work. This is the pivotal part of the entire process. At this point, underground water is sucked up by the pump and goes through a bent pipe to the water tank, which is on the ground. The tank has a gigantic size and thus a rather large capacity. At this step – the final step, water is transported to the village and distributed to its every household.

  * 老章提醒注意文中的【动词】、【表程度的形容词/副词】。

  * 老章同时提醒:过程简单的流程图很可能写不够字数,所以,需要刻意留意一些可能被忽视的特征,包括装置的特点、某个环节的复杂性/重要性等。

  # Conclusion

  In light of steps described above, the solar powered water pump works in a relatively simple way.

  * 结尾段落应再一次对制作工序的流程图进行总述。同样是写过程是否复杂(此图中的流程不复杂),不再重复提及用到的设备或工具多少。


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