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3分钟学会一个雅思7分句(七十一),小作文中妙用with!
2021-01-14 16:55   作者:新航道   阅读量:

小小一个with,往往也能成为写作的制胜法宝。


本期,我们将通过剑桥10》Test 2 小作文来看考官会怎么用with:


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“附加变化”


Sweden and Denmark showed a different pattern, with falls in banana sales from 1.8-1 and 2-0.9 million euros.


写法:with +趋势名词+数据


解析:


1. 句子主干部分先作概括性描述(总):两国情况不一


2. 其后以with falls详细展开(分),添上具体数值以凸显并证明主干:销售额减少的情况不同


3. 仿写:Sweden and Denmark showed a similar pattern, with an increase of 0.2 million euros in Fairtrade coffee sales.



“排除异己”


Comparing the two tables, it is clear that in 1999 Fairtrade coffee sales ranged from 0.8-3 million euros in these five countries, while banana sales also mostly clustered between 0.6 and 2 million euros, with Switzerland the outlier at a huge 15 million euros. 


写法:with + noun. the outlier + 数据


解析:


1. 本句很长,我们大致梳理句子内容为:1999年,咖啡销售额在0.8-3 million euros之间,而香蕉销售额基本集中在0.6-2 million euros之间。简言之,为数据划定一个范围。


2. 但有时,这组数据间会有“异军”突起,此时不妨用with短语来排除特殊项。


3. 本句还可以借鉴的地方在:在Switzerland后补上同位语名词“the outlier 异常值” 。


4. 仿写:In 1999, Fairtrade coffee sales mostly ranged between 1 and 6 million euros, with the UK the outlier at a huge 20 million euros.


with的用法还有很多,我们下期再细数!


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