剑10G类testB雅思写作大作文范文
Writing Task 2
Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
a)题目分析，包括写作中需要讨论的观点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。
讨论玩具在儿童成长过程中的作用，并对“非常多的玩具”进行定义，阐述儿童拥有很多玩具的后果。考生需要从两个方面进行论证，不能忽略任何一方。此外，考生需要借助一些有关儿童成长的研究理论，而不要仅局限于自身的主观经验。
关于此话题，新航道雅思培训君给了两篇观点不同的参考范文，供烤鸭参考。
参考范文1——玩具多的优与劣
When it comes to toys, I think we can all agree that they are an important part of a child’s mental development. However, one must ask the question – is there a limit to the amount of toys a chind should have? Personally, I think there is not.
The more toys children have, the more they can express themsclves and learn about the world. For example, using Lego will help develop children’s interest in architecture and problem-solving as well as enhance their creativity. while dolls will leach young girls the importance of looking pretty, which we can all agree is the most important thing in life. There is a debate over whether or not children should be given smartphones, but I think they should – after all, phones are an essential part of people’s lives nowadays, so it is best to teach children how to use them and communieate with others when they are young.
Some people may argue that having too many toys will spoil the children and make them more materialistic, but I think that’s a limited view. After all, can a person have too much money or too many possessions when he is an adult? Having toys teaches the children that some things are valuable, and the more things you have, the happier you will be, which is an important lesson for a child to learn.
Therefore, I think it is important that growing children be provided with enough toys to keep them happy.
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说到玩具，我想我们都同意这是儿童智力开发的重要部分。但是，有人肯定会问——儿童拥有的玩具数量是否应该有限制?我个人认为，并没有限制。
孩子拥有的玩具越多，他们越会表达自己并越能感知世界。例如，乐高积木不仅能够提高创造力，还能够开发孩子对建筑的兴趣，增强解决问题的能力;而玩偶则能够教会女孩子们打扮的重要性，我们所有人都会赞同这是生活中最重要的事情。对于是否应该让孩子玩智能手机这一问题，现在还存在争议，但是我认为孩子应该玩手机——毕竟，手机是现代人生活中必不可少的一部分，因此能教会孩子们如何使用手机，并教会他们在年幼时与人沟通。
一些人会说，拥有太多的玩具会宠坏孩子，使他们变得更加物质化，但我认为这个观点太局限了。毕竟，难道你能说一个人长大后拥有太多钱或太多财产吗?拥有玩具能教会孩子们什么东西是宝贵的，而拥有的东西越多，就会越快乐，这是孩子需要学习的重要一课。
因此，我认为给不断成长的孩子足够多的玩具从而使他们开心是非常重要的。
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